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Don't die on me

Submitted by Search on Fri, 2012-05-04 23:06

I don’t ask for much,
I really don’t
But know I ask that you don’t die on me,

Because I haven’t spent my life or my words
Making you worry about me,
So please don’t make me worry about you,

It wouldn’t be fair if I go on and worry about you,

Because if I do,
Then I would have failed you,
I would have let you down,

So please don’t die on me today.

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Wed, 2012-05-09 04:13

Lovely thoughts of thinking that you have not done enough.
Tell them again in other words they may understand those feelings,
Yours Ian.T

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There are a million reasons to believe in yourself,
So find more reasons to believe in others..