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The Devil Is A Liar

The devil is a liar
he swore
it would be different

but we knew
it wouldn’t be
nothing changes

one more time
one more lie
no more chances
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I think this is very open and also out of form. Try to make the reader think which you are more than capable of...i am sure you will do it during edits...

Regards...

raj (sublime_ocean)

Not sure what that means

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Barbara i meant syllable count wise...

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raj (sublime_ocean)

This wasn’t a sunku lol. I was just writing I’ll change the title

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We all know his destiny and its not in heaven that's for sure

Mario Vitale

All,day long

*Collaborative Poetry Workshop*
Amqerican Version of Japanese Poetry
~American Renga~
Free Verse, Western, Modern, etc
~ Renga ~
Haiku, Senyru, Tanka, Renga
All Neopoets are welcome to join the Collaborative Poetry Writing fun.

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