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The Devil Is A Liar
The devil is a liar
he swore
it would be different
but we knew
it wouldn’t be
nothing changes
one more time
one more lie
no more chances
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Comments
raj
Tue, 2018-02-27 13:35
Hi Barbara
I think this is very open and also out of form. Try to make the reader think which you are more than capable of...i am sure you will do it during edits...
Regards...
raj (sublime_ocean)
Barbara Writes
Tue, 2018-02-27 16:49
Ok
Not sure what that means
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raj
Wed, 2018-02-28 05:59
Barbara i meant syllable
Barbara i meant syllable count wise...
Regards...
raj (sublime_ocean)
Barbara Writes
Wed, 2018-02-28 10:33
Oh yeah
This wasn’t a sunku lol. I was just writing I’ll change the title
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chevyvent
Sat, 2018-03-03 15:11
Very true the devil lies
We all know his destiny and its not in heaven that's for sure
Mario Vitale
Barbara Writes
Sun, 2018-03-04 20:36
Yes
All,day long
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