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Lately I feel so...

Posted Dec 6, 2016 · 6 lines · 11 critiques

My river of love is a dried pond,
My land of expectations is a desert of sand,
My feelings were frozen,
And dreams closed in dungeon,
All the bonds never insisted,
Wish I never existed.

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May 2026
13 Wed

Anniversary
15 years of membership
May 2021
13 Thu

Anniversary
10 years of membership
December 2016
11 Sun

Received a critique
on Lately I feel so... from @raj
"I wont call it dark...it has grey shades of sentiments and emotions pretty well expressed ...i suggest that you try and change the word "insisted"..to me it appears to be like an after thought as a forced rhyme as if yo…"
07 Wed

Received a critique
on Lately I feel so... from @Esker
"out of a bender..the post depression chronic..But of this I feel the desolation and I like your writing style the use of insist.. persist....I like the suggestions here of hurt and pain...sometimes I find it hard to get…"
07 Wed

Received a critique
on Lately I feel so... from @lovedly
"T R U T H Only no twist I only thirst for the love of humanity a verse as lovely as the Blue sea the Blue Nile maybe The vast distant horizon farther than the dawn whom I still adorn where has she gone I search morn aft…"
06 Tue

Posted a poem
Lately I feel so...
"My river of love is a dried pond,"
Open thread 6 lines
June 2016
12 Sun

Posted a poem
Thanks for your love
"All this while....,"
Open thread 5 lines
May 2016
13 Fri

Anniversary
5 years of membership
February 2014
05 Wed

Posted a poem
Silence
"Sometimes it makes a relationship,"
Open thread 7 lines
01 Sat

Most-discussed work
The Big Event

23 critiques to date.
May 2012
13 Sun

Anniversary
One year of membership
May 2011
13 Fri

Joined Neopoet
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First poem published 1 days later.
February 2010
15 Mon

Highest posting month
February 2010 — 7 poems
08 Mon

First critique offered
on "Constantly (revised)" by @Stefan
October 2008
30 Thu

First publication
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