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Patricia
Member since August 12, 2018
Member for 7 years, 9 months
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Angel
I see you there glowing,
like an angel in a darkened sky,
gentle as I ever seen.
I bow my head before your eyes.
But alas, you are sleeping,
And your eyes are closed.
It’s just a figment of my imagination,
you were there you really were.
I see no sense in what you are.
To me you are the most wonderful creature,
and maybe you truly are an angel,
sent from God to guide me.
Patricia’s timeline
- July 2024
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01 Mon
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01 MonReceived a critique
on Angel from @Alex Tanner
"I liked this immensely, a nice soft read. A possible typo. Did you mean 'gentle' where you have 'gentile'? Alex." -
01 Mon
- August 2023
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12 SatAnniversary
5 years of membership
- September 2022
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24 Sat
- October 2019
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13 SunReceived a critique
on The Demise Of A Witch (October Contest) from @ThisIsMe
"This is beautiful poem, I especially love your rhyme pattern and the lines "Perhaps she was dead some of them said" and "not daring to take chances instead". Maybe think about changing the word order of the line "they f…" -
12 Sat
- August 2019
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12 MonAnniversary
One year of membership
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11 Sun
- February 2019
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01 FriFirst publication
What I Wish For You
- August 2018
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13 MonFirst critique offered
on "Why Did I Love You (August Contest)" (since unpublished) by @Backbeat
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12 SunJoined Neopoet
Membership begins
First poem published 173 days later.
About Me
Location: USA
Recent Work
Angel
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My Trip Down Memory Lane
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Dawn Of A Beautiful Day
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Sore Feet
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Puzzle
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You Rule My Darkness
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Courtly Love
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Worthwhile (August Contest)
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The Girl From Kentucky
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Contest Wins
This member has not yet won any contests.
Workshops
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| Immersing the reader via imagery (Let's get started) | (syllabus) | Splash Pool | Started 2019-09-16 | Concluded |
| Primal Poetry | (syllabus) | Plunge Pool | Started 2019-06-17 | Concluded |