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Acclimate
I see her hidden
in plan sight
hands pressed
to her eyes
this image remains
among few
a day that won't wake up
I slide into a pocket
fortified against drafts
Review Request (Intensity):
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Review Request (Direction):
What did you think of my title?
What did you think of the rhythm or pattern or pacing?
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IKnowNoBox
Sun, 2012-01-15 13:49
Thank you,
In ink.
David
author commentIKnowNoBox
Mon, 2012-01-16 13:20
thqnk you Mark
in ink,
David
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