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Anger , strong adult language - writing with emotion workshop
Skank
Fucking mother fucker
makes me want to rip heads off.
Two bit male slag
Can't keep it in his pants
Whips it out when ever he can
Want to destroy the arse holes
Of the species
Castrate scum suckers of this world.
I'm not a violent girl
I'm meek and mild
shouldn't let you do this to me
But my blood boils
Feel the need to massacre
when I see you dicking me around
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Comments
lou
Sat, 2011-09-10 09:22
lol
what little old me?
lou
Stand tall, be proud to be who you are, give the world the finger!!!!
raj
Sat, 2011-09-10 16:09
Lou
this write does express anger...i suggest you take off the line "I'm meek and mild" because it softens the poem...sort of takes the steam out of the anger...
raj (sublime_ocean)
lou
Sun, 2011-09-11 00:33
Lol
Thanks it's pure fiction of course lol
Lou
Stand tall, be proud to be who you are, give the world the finger!!!!
raj
Sun, 2011-09-11 05:24
Guys...stay out of the way of
Guys...stay out of the way of these girls..they are in a murderous mood...lol...
raj (sublime_ocean)
lou
Sun, 2011-09-11 07:34
LOL
Good guys don't need to worry LMAO!!
Lou
Stand tall, be proud to be who you are, give the world the finger!!!!
Candlewitch
Sun, 2011-09-11 12:29
Dear Lou,
Two bit male slag
Can't keep it in his pants
Whips it out when ever he can
Excellent head of steam you have going here!
always, Cat
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lou
Sun, 2011-09-11 13:38
Cat
Thank you it was kinda hard to stop LMAO!!
Love Lou
Stand tall, be proud to be who you are, give the world the finger!!!!
lou
Mon, 2011-09-12 11:46
Calmness
Calmness has returned
LOL
lou
Stand tall, be proud to be who you are, give the world the finger!!!!
Rhiannon1010
Fri, 2011-11-04 14:07
WOW !!!
You go girl!!! this REALLLLLY shows some anger. This poem is like a pissy freight train for the mind! GOAL ACHEIVED! rotflmao
lou
Fri, 2011-11-04 15:59
hi
thanks i'm really glad that you liked it
lou
Stand tall, be proud to be who you are, give the world the finger!!!!