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Anger , strong adult language - writing with emotion workshop

Skank
Fucking mother fucker
makes me want to rip heads off.

Two bit male slag 
Can't keep it in his pants
Whips it out when ever he can

Want to destroy the arse holes
Of the species
Castrate scum suckers of this world.

I'm not a violent girl 
I'm meek and mild 
shouldn't let you  do this to me

But my blood boils 
Feel the need to massacre 
when I see you dicking me around 

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what little old me?

lou

Stand tall, be proud to be who you are, give the world the finger!!!!

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this write does express anger...i suggest you take off the line "I'm meek and mild" because it softens the poem...sort of takes the steam out of the anger...

raj (sublime_ocean)

Thanks it's pure fiction of course lol

Lou

Stand tall, be proud to be who you are, give the world the finger!!!!

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Guys...stay out of the way of these girls..they are in a murderous mood...lol...

raj (sublime_ocean)

Good guys don't need to worry LMAO!!

Lou

Stand tall, be proud to be who you are, give the world the finger!!!!

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Two bit male slag
Can't keep it in his pants
Whips it out when ever he can

Excellent head of steam you have going here!

always, Cat

When you fling poo, some of the stink sticks to you!

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Thank you it was kinda hard to stop LMAO!!

Love Lou

Stand tall, be proud to be who you are, give the world the finger!!!!

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Calmness has returned

LOL

lou

Stand tall, be proud to be who you are, give the world the finger!!!!

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You go girl!!! this REALLLLLY shows some anger. This poem is like a pissy freight train for the mind! GOAL ACHEIVED! rotflmao

thanks i'm really glad that you liked it

lou

Stand tall, be proud to be who you are, give the world the finger!!!!

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