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Crocus Buds

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crocus buds burst forth
peep and poke through dunes of white
winter bows to spring

when the sun begins to shine again
life's vital truths made clear at road's end

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Structured: Eastern
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I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
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there is nothing like a fresh start in life.
an there is no better metaphor than the seasons
I like this short and to the point write
respect to you!
Eddie

LIFE ISN'T ABOUT WAITING FOR THE STORM TO PASS
IT'S ABOUT LEARNING HOW TO DANCE IN THE RAIN.
VIVIAN GREENE

sorry for the late response. I have been struggling to recuperate from a rather tedious bout with the flu. Obviously a new strain has reared its head this season. The autumn over here has graced us with inclement weather.

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This short write with Haiku start works well..................stan

glad to know it worked well. Cheers, CB

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'Break, break break on thy cold grey stones, O Sea.'

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