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Crocus Buds
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crocus buds burst forth
peep and poke through dunes of white
winter bows to spring
when the sun begins to shine again
life's vital truths made clear at road's end
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Style / type:
Structured: Eastern
Review Request (Intensity):
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
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Eduardo Cruz
Sun, 2011-04-03 19:38
Fred
there is nothing like a fresh start in life.
an there is no better metaphor than the seasons
I like this short and to the point write
respect to you!
Eddie
LIFE ISN'T ABOUT WAITING FOR THE STORM TO PASS
IT'S ABOUT LEARNING HOW TO DANCE IN THE RAIN.
VIVIAN GREENE
crypticbard
Thu, 2011-04-14 08:39
Thanks Eddie
sorry for the late response. I have been struggling to recuperate from a rather tedious bout with the flu. Obviously a new strain has reared its head this season. The autumn over here has graced us with inclement weather.
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author commentscribbler
Sun, 2011-04-03 22:12
hi
This short write with Haiku start works well..................stan
crypticbard
Thu, 2011-04-14 08:40
thanks stan
glad to know it worked well. Cheers, CB
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