MB,

this has very early demo music...the lyrics and music were created earlier today...I am more of the lyric guy and vocalist with the band...I leave the music to the other half of the band...but that doesn't mean I don't like to tinker with sounds and tempos.

Typo!...ah bollocks!...I was so into 'chord' changes that I got carried away...I have made the change, thank you.

No crit?...oh come on, I can't be perfect, oh alright then, I am! Lol! (awaits for the verbal beating)

cheers,

HS

Pixee,

thanks for stopping by to read and comment.

Glad the write got you thinking.

Don't put yourself down, I am sure you can not only come near to what I have written, but probably go higher. This is a simple lyric, with a simple theme...I hope you'll get to hear it soon.

Many thanks,

HS

Anna,

I have an image of the needle being stuck in your ass now!! LOL!

Thanks for dropping in,

regards,

HS

Cat,

yes, I will have to have a quiet word with Bee, as I liked the original lyrics and now I also like Bee's suggestions!...so she has given me a dilema too!

Neo police, ego's, what here at Neopoet...I don't believe it!

LOL!

Raj, has opened my eyes to the whirlwind theme, I didn't have that intention, but the more I read this piece, the whirlwind has become a part of it...the music will hopefully incorporate that too. Funny how someone looking in from outside the box can spot something so obvious that the writer missed!

I am working on Raj's lyrics at the moment...he's good...but don't tell him!...there's no more room for another ego!!

"Brilliant"...of course it is, me and my ego created it!

cheers,

HS

Zigs,

The tempo is still undecided...originally a fast paced one to indicate the spinning of the needle...but with Raj's input of a whirlwind effect, I am thinking of starting with a slow tempo, and gradually picking it up and ending in a creshendo of some sort.

Did you want fries to go with this take out?

Thanks mate,

HS

MB,

really liked the first track 'Benevolence'...I am not normally taken with instrumentals, but with this one you managed to keep it refreshingly different throughout and despite it's 11mins length, I was totally absorbed in it.

A Lie Is A Lye - this is amazing, I really like sound clips thrown in to a pice of music...and this one really worked a treat. I do listen to a lot of rhythmic noise tracks which are normally crossed with aggressive vocals...this track got quite aggressive and again, was thoroughally enjoyable. Great climax to that one too.

Ogen - I wasn't too keen on the distorted breathing sequence at the beginning, it didn't really do anything for me, until it melted into a spoken word section, then it picked up and the distorted breathing became easier to tolerate. I enjoyed the early 80's electronic sequences about midway through and that ran to the end of the track and finished it off really well, especially as it became more aggressive.

Borgore - Sleepyhead rmx mixed with Noisia - Painkilla - This was a very clubby sounding track, it was ok, but i am not really into dance and this, although well produced, didn't grab me. It changed style about 2 mins 30 secs in and I began to enjoy it much more.

Peel M£ -{}-:A5:-{}- Random Memory Dump//-\\5//-\\ - wow, that is a title and a half! Didn't like this one at all, sorry but the noises became irritating.

Peel-=- Me-=-A5-=-A1 - this one was brilliant and I loved the whole track from beginning to end. Good slow build up and then got quite messy (but in a good way). Definetly rhythmic noise in the latter half of the track...awesome!

']['arot - this was the most lyrically friendly track. I could write lyrics to go with this one as it is quite tranquil in places but with enough drive to stay interesting. My favourite track of the lot without a doubt.

Baskease - Trent Reznor (Nine Inch nails) has recently written an instrumental album and this track sounded much like that. Very crisp sound effects and atmosphere...a good track for a film. Good distortion at the end.

Test pepperr - VartDader - Had a good sci-fi feel to it. Great production. wasn't keen on the sound clip voice at the end...didn't feel it needed that. Another excellent track and I take my hat off to you for keeping it fresh for the whole 9 mins+.

Part Tribal - not much to say about this one, i guess it was simply a test piece to see how you handled 'tribal'...which you did fine. I would like to hear a longer version of this one and see what else you incorporate into it.

Test Stepperr - Partabl£? - had good tempo changes. was a little weird, but I liked it's weirdness!

Dragged sample -=- 38 ben'jam'inos {preview} - I got bored with this one and skipped to next track...nothing was really happening for me on this track.

{](A/Mean\Bee)[}<8}{|i!|}{(_)}> }>Strawberry Jam<{acoustic instrumental play mastering} - short title! This was a raw track and had me gripped throughout. Funky, noisey, acoustic and distorted, all melted into one! Loved it. 15 mins!...wow, that was a long track!

A Machine Slayer -=- Multi Cultural Layer,,.... - this one sped up and slowed down with such ease it was a dream to listen to. My only issue, the title...it didn't sound like a Machine being Slayed! Lol!

Thanks for the link, I had fun.

HS