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Beyond The Beyond

Submitted by loved on Tue, 2012-01-24 09:48

There is no life hereafter…
But your belief
May remain yours,
Lest I prove myself wrong
And
Meet you in galaxies beyond...........
The beyond

And

You happen to recognize,
This young bard so small,
In a speck of light glistened by sunlight
Towards the end of eternity and beyond
Let us live in hope

And

Be not forlorn,
As human life exists
Only in the folds of time
since gone is gone.
This is my belief,
Let me be that isolated one,
A lonely star

And

A sun may you be one...

Style / type: 
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity): 
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing stage: 
Editing - rough draft

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Candlewitch

Tue, 2012-01-24 12:26

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You are developing into quite the poet over time and practice! I liked the whole poem but these lines hit home for me:

Be not forlorn,
As human life exists
Only in the folds of time
since gone is gone.
This is my belief,
Let me be that isolated one,
A lonely star

always, Cat

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loved

Tue, 2012-01-24 13:18

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Cat With regards

loved

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