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Volatile
I'm a bitch
Jump in feet first
and think later.
Volatile witch
quick to anger,
Curse and fight.
Someone attacks me
they live to regret It
they will never forget it.
Filled with self loathing
Brimming with remorse,
Overflowing with regret.
Not to proud to admit
When I'm wrong,
Even when my foots in my mouth.
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Comments
Kailashana2
Thu, 2011-06-02 13:11
Hey, this rolled out of your
Hey, this rolled out of your mouth like honey on a spoon. Did you mean to do that?
Don't worry (if you are), you'll grow out of this stage, I did. ;-)
~A
lou
Thu, 2011-06-02 13:18
Thanks
Thanks
Stand tall, be proud to be who you are, give the world the finger!!!!
Kailashana2
Thu, 2011-06-02 13:22
I forgot mention I like this
I forgot mention I like this almost as much as your *bitch slapped*. Now, how could I possibly have forgotten that one?
~A
lou
Thu, 2011-06-02 13:29
Anna
Surprised that you remember that one.
Thanks
Lou
Stand tall, be proud to be who you are, give the world the finger!!!!
Kailashana2
Thu, 2011-06-02 13:41
How could I not? lol. ~A
How could I not? lol.
~A
lou
Fri, 2011-06-03 15:50
Xena
I need anger management lol
Lou
Stand tall, be proud to be who you are, give the world the finger!!!!
magics02
Fri, 2011-06-03 16:29
Volatile
I bet you felt good once you pressed the enter button Lou:) I know what you mean in this write of yours and it is good to get that anger out before IT sets in.
Love to you gal
Mona
lou
Sat, 2011-06-04 01:35
Mona
I do my best . I never resort to violence. Lol
This is only slightly autobiographical, I have embellished some what.
Lou
Stand tall, be proud to be who you are, give the world the finger!!!!
Bonitaj
Fri, 2011-07-15 14:10
Hi Lou!
Anger well captured here...
As long as you don 't take yourself too seriously all's well . . . ;)
Boni
Bonitaj
lou
Fri, 2011-07-15 14:13
Boni
This poem was supposed to be tongue i cheek.
thanks Lou
Stand tall, be proud to be who you are, give the world the finger!!!!