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Volatile

I'm a bitch
Jump in feet first
and think later.

Volatile witch 
quick to anger,
Curse and fight.

Someone attacks me 
they live to regret It
they will never forget it.

Filled with self loathing
Brimming with remorse,
Overflowing with regret.

Not to proud to admit
When I'm wrong,
Even when my foots in my mouth.

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Hey, this rolled out of your mouth like honey on a spoon. Did you mean to do that?

Don't worry (if you are), you'll grow out of this stage, I did. ;-)

~A

Thanks

Stand tall, be proud to be who you are, give the world the finger!!!!

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I forgot mention I like this almost as much as your *bitch slapped*. Now, how could I possibly have forgotten that one?

~A

Surprised that you remember that one.

Thanks

Lou

Stand tall, be proud to be who you are, give the world the finger!!!!

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How could I not? lol.

~A

I need anger management lol

Lou

Stand tall, be proud to be who you are, give the world the finger!!!!

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I bet you felt good once you pressed the enter button Lou:) I know what you mean in this write of yours and it is good to get that anger out before IT sets in.

Love to you gal
Mona

I do my best . I never resort to violence. Lol
This is only slightly autobiographical, I have embellished some what.

Lou

Stand tall, be proud to be who you are, give the world the finger!!!!

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Anger well captured here...
As long as you don 't take yourself too seriously all's well . . . ;)
Boni

Bonitaj

This poem was supposed to be tongue i cheek.

thanks Lou

Stand tall, be proud to be who you are, give the world the finger!!!!

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