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Forever In My Heart
I wipe the tears of the rain
That run down my face
I'll wait for love in vain
Until time will shatter like grace
I'll hold you in my heart
Like the wind in my hands
I'll keep your memory as a whole part
Of my dreams that drift like sands
Until time is no more
The wound and pain of loving you
Will remain in a closed door
As a living existence of a love so true
In the hour glass
Memories of you will forever live
Like the beautiful lass
That wished for the love you couldn't and will never give
Close your eyes
And feel the wind of memory
And when cicada in the dusk cries
Find it in your heart to remember me
Bury me with wildflowers
And do not forget
That stars are my witnesses
For this unrequited love I do not regret
Live to see the dawn each day
And be happy holding her hand
I may find it hard to say
But for you, my heart tries to understand
Please, even in a small part let it be
That you'll remember this love of a fleeting being
Look at the wildflowers and do not forget me
For tomorrow, at twilight, I'll be leaving...
Comments
The Rain Sprite
Wed, 2011-05-18 10:52
Nice to be Back
Thanks once again! I've been away for quite some time...and a lot happened to me especially to my love life. It's amazing how events in life (even the worst part) can make you produce a work that is real and beautiful. It's kind of crazy but I was really imagining myself living my life with this broken heart of mine...and I just put everything into writing.
Thanks for the encouragement! It's nice to be back!
"Time is a sly one,
See?
In a blink of an eye,
It is gone."
scribbler
Wed, 2011-05-18 21:53
hello
Welcome back. I enjoyed the read. I also seldom critique a poem by a member I've not met before, so hurry up and write another so I can feel free to give alternatives lol..............scribbler
The Rain Sprite
Fri, 2011-05-20 08:48
Nice to meet you!
Thanks, don't worry I don't mind being critic because I think it's natural. And we need criticisms to know how we are so it's important. I'm fine being critic, I kind of appreciate it =)
Thanks
"Time is a sly one,
See?
In a blink of an eye,
It is gone."
The Rain Sprite
Fri, 2011-05-20 08:49
Nice to meet you!
Thanks, don't worry I don't mind being critic because I think it's natural. And we need criticisms to know how we are so it's important. I'm fine being critic, I kind of appreciate it =)
Thanks
"Time is a sly one,
See?
In a blink of an eye,
It is gone."