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OriginalRhyku
Sat, 2016-10-15 14:04
Mark, I do not mean to
Mark, I do not mean to educate anyone and certainly not experienced persons like yourself who have a comprehensive education in life's lessons. I just use poetry as a means of expressing my views and enjoying the experience of transposing my thoughts into written words. If anyone agrees with my views, thanks but even for those who disagree, I appreciate the frank exchange since there needs to be a plurality of opinions and ideas to make the discussion more interesting.
Candlewitch
Sat, 2016-10-15 14:16
I cannot find fault with...
Tenacity drives
Perspicacity survives
Veracity thrives
always, Cat
*
When someone reads your work
And responds, please be courteous
And reply in kind, thanks.
Esker
Sat, 2016-10-15 14:27
Learned man
a new word
Perspicacity!
thank U Poet!
Mr Wolf!
OriginalRhyku
Sat, 2016-10-15 16:01
Thanks Cat, Esker
Mark provided a helpful link : http://www.onelook.com/ that is useful especially for finding the appropriate rhyming words, synonyms, etc.
bengt Frisk
Sun, 2016-10-16 06:16
Poem
Great poem!
I really like the so-called economic poems when they are at the same time so full of thoghts
A small suggestion only
Sense and reason's linked in any way so I can imagine a fourth row t e x
Emotionellaty binds
OriginalRhyku
Sun, 2016-10-16 06:44
Thanks for your review
I think that your fourth line suggestion is a good one and a positive addition - only that adding the fourth line would mean that the poem would not meet Rhyku requirements (Three lines of 5-7-5 syllables respectively that rhyme).