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ACROBATICS :updated
ACROBATICS
On a flying trapeze
high in a summer breeze
no net below to catch my fall
I ride Life's winds
no cares at all.
I live for the joy
of the moment
and never look down
into the darkness I know
Time flies with me
and I hold on
as long as I can
but I'm starting to fall
again
you won't hear a sound;
no thud, no sigh
no weeping eyes
will follow me down.
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Comments
raj
Sat, 2015-03-21 14:27
Joe
very touching indeed...
be well dear friend..
Regards,
raj (sublime_ocean)
Geremia
Sat, 2015-03-21 16:39
Thank you, good friend. joe
Thank you, good friend.
joe
wesley snow
Sat, 2015-03-21 21:33
Rough draft.
Don't know what you're going to do with it. It's quite special as is.
W. H. Snow
A poet is a nightingale, who sits in darkness and sings to cheer its own solitude with sweet sounds. Percy Bysshe Shelley
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Geremia
Sun, 2015-03-22 10:39
I need to eliminate last line
I need to eliminate last line and polish up some aspects of the piece..
thank you, Wes
joe