zebra

Member since March 20, 2016

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DAda Warp Land ...Ero Guro Poetry

Posted Aug 24, 2019 · 64 lines · 8 critiques

i'm unwinding my head
on
honey moon belly
sucking carnivorous losanges
falling in love with glazed
eye ball devils
hypnotic stare

destination
a tunnel of fiendish odysseys

blood drooling eel
vomits gush white
daddy long leg threads
in honeys wet cage
to wither

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writhing spit hot
in fat muscle and bone
headless
head first
like a mindless falcon
after scattered mice

i feel her teeth tearing
syringes of ecstasy
ransacking swollen motion spirals
and cocks like bronz buckaroos
at a fancy pool party
crimson cum macabre
weenie roast bon bon fire

licking her lump of desire
a rousing bogyman sermon
speaks in incinerating tongues
swallowing a hideous parfait

slut growl
girl squat
scum twat
mint julip throat
choke symphony
abducting lascivious pollinated gulps

take me in like reckless bull sap
through your red
dada warp land
pit of the brain
undulant flesh landscape
of shapeless ovule spume
mouthing night blows

incised flagellation's
devour buffet spread maiden derelict
arched and trembling
drunk and drugged
like a buttermilk sky
groaning hysterical
in feral muck stained beds
of puce and slime ochre pigments

stunned umbra
a famished
deep veined jutting peninsula
longing for princess bitch dynasties
while vast thighs radiate inferno hearths
and rolling hill fuck hieroglyphics
decipher rug pugilist lap songs

my goddess i long for your flavor
of bruised fruit bend over
crawling like the dead of night
on pitch vanta shadows
where love becomes a savage

zebra’s timeline

March 2026
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Anniversary
10 years of membership
June 2022
09 Thu

Received a critique
on Stich Mouth from @Geezer
""The long and the short of it"; is that for most poets writing a piece is much like sex, sometimes bizarre and fetish-like, but nonetheless, we get a feeling of orgasm when someone "gets" where we are coming from. Some…"
09 Thu

Received a critique
on Stich Mouth from @Geezer
"The short, vibrant or trilled sound characteristic of a grasshopper or cicada. ~ Geezer. ."
09 Thu

Received a critique
on Stich Mouth from @professor jinx
"WTF does this poem mean LoL ! ? thanks !"
August 2021
15 Sun

New follower
@lovedly
March 2021
20 Sat

Anniversary
5 years of membership
February 2020
29 Sat

Received a critique
on Stich Mouth from @Edna Sweetlove
"...Just asking. What is "chirr" ?? ."
29 Sat

Received a critique
on Stich Mouth from @Geezer
"over the title for a minute or two, before I got it! But then, I saw the originality of it and I like it! Your language is fine and the rhythm is good, it didn't falter once. The theme is also good and reminds me that w…"
December 2019
09 Mon

Received a critique
on Fallen Queen...A Fucked Up Fairy Tale from @Edna Sweetlove
"And will it be worth it? Two spelling mistakes in the first 3 lines is NOT a great start. PAST not past SLIMY not slimmey On the positive side, I liked "viscous sincerity". I expect no less from a frog. Puzzled by the s…"
November 2019
04 Mon

Received a critique
on Witching Hour from @Edna Sweetlove
"I liked the line about festooned buttocks but want to know with what are they festooned?"
August 2019
29 Thu

Critiqued
"The Similar Twins" by @Marthalyn
"Do you know what a cooks job is ???...Its to make the food taste great. So remember the job of a writer is to hold the attention of the reader; to magnetize, to weave a spell, to seduce, to entrance! Without that we hav…"
28 Wed

Critiqued
"The Similar Twins" by @Marthalyn
"I like the idea of a poem that wants to make a point. In this write you seem to be on the verge of making it and then you transform it into a puzzle. You never identify those emotions and why are they twins ...why not o…"
26 Mon

Received a critique
on DAda Warp Land ...Ero Guro Poetry from @weirdelf
"but I can teach and if anyone ever says that tired old saw starting with 'those that can, do...' I immediately resort to fisticuffs."
24 Sat

Posted a poem
DAda Warp Land ...Ero Guro Poetry
"i'm unwinding my head"
Open thread 64 lines
20 Tue

Critiqued
"Lyndel" by @weirdelf
"Revision re write forgive I just mean chew over it a bit"
20 Tue

Critiqued
"Lyndel" by @weirdelf
"she fucked like a wildcat in a thunderstorm,,, Thats a line naturally intuitive to your poems intention it seems to me. It lets the reader know how deep the desire and passion and to my mind more than any line you wrote…"
19 Mon

Posted a poem
Look Into My Eyes
"dissolute neo transgressive"
Open thread 39 lines
19 Mon

Critiqued
"Lyndel" by @weirdelf
"Its a amazing how there are some you never forget no matter how the years roll on I was 28 she was 17 and omg so hot ...incredibly sexy cuddly and loveable Big cat blue eyes , skin like baby butter tan silk ...I was stu…"
19 Mon

Critiqued
"Lyndel" by @weirdelf
"Thats got a combustive sizzle to it. I really like this theme of left emptied and desolate, a poor puddle of pain by the aftermath of unrequited love. I think all in all it would have more traction if it was paired down…"
18 Sun

Critiqued
"Temple of the Doll" by @quillsveinback
"Some things I've been thinking about: What do you think of the notion of earning an image by connecting it with the concrete as opposed to creating it from the less-anchored transmission of the imagination? Is hyper ima…"
18 Sun

Critiqued
"Bloodletting In Singular" by @quillsveinback
"Its definitely mutual!!!!!! :)"
13 Tue

Posted a poem
Witching Hour
"stuffed like manicotti"
Open thread 42 lines
10 Sat

Posted a poem
Tourniquet
"nightmare fuel"
Open thread 67 lines
08 Thu

Posted a poem
Under the advice of Legal Council
"Under the advice of legal counsel I declare that the entire content of my filthy disgusting poems about assholes, pussies, smelly feet, tremulous flesh perspiration, bleeding, crying, screaming fuck me to shreds; are for the purposes of bending minds and hearts towards becoming a sex addict, porn fiend, pervert or masturbatory worm gob entertainment slut and that I do not vouch for the veracity of the content; since I'm not my right mind due to large amounts of amyloid plaque build up in my gerontological decrepitudinous brain that strangely pulsates the mind box sexuality of a disturbed twelve year old boy who likes to watch his teenage sister and her cheer leader pom pom pony tail crew in the shower while playing with himself. I in no way waive any and all of my rights as a free citizen of the world to any individual, group, agency, government or any other entity, and that the use of any content posted by me for any purpose other than personal entertainment, population paste, or creepy oyster droppings, is NOT granted, and furthermore that I reserve the right to hit on all your friends, write poems like scuzzy snake spray, and tell your mother if your caught reading it or sitting at the computer for hours with a jumbo tube of KY spaffing throat yogurt, protein shakes, bath tub bubbles with bloodshot bulging eyes and saliva drool squiggles down Sally sloppy slit lips"
Open thread 3 lines
01 Thu

Posted a poem
Asshole...The Poem
"she moves her mouth"
Open thread 36 lines
July 2019
26 Fri

Posted a poem
Fantastwatia
"come towards the bed"
Open thread 41 lines
22 Mon

Posted a poem
Stich Mouth
"thumb twiddlers"
Open thread 38 lines
15 Mon

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Black Eyed Venus
"black eyed Venus"
Open thread 32 lines
08 Mon

Posted a poem
TIN TIN DEO ....I UNDERSTAND YOU
"TIN TIN DEO....I UNDERSTAND YOU"
Open thread 24 lines
04 Thu

Posted a poem
I AM NOT A ROBOT
"69 69 69 96"
Open thread 3 lines
03 Wed

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WRONG
"a one dimensional"
Open thread 51 lines
December 2018
18 Tue

New follower
@chevyvent
November 2018
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Most-discussed work
Dance of Raven Girl

25 critiques to date.
October 2018
26 Fri

New follower
@Lavaheart
24 Wed

New follower
@IRiz
16 Tue

First critique offered
on "I’ll Whisper A Prayer" by @Butterfly15
15 Mon

Highest posting month
October 2018 — 16 poems
March 2017
20 Mon

Anniversary
One year of membership
March 2016
20 Sun

First publication
SWITCH : A POEM...sado masochism XXX (since unpublished)
20 Sun

Joined Neopoet
Membership begins

First poem published 1 days later.

About Me

About me

i write dark transgressive sexually explicit poetry

My poems remain explorations of the subconscious erotic
If I where a film maker or a novelist you would see me telling a story; not judge me for it although I admit to my paraphilias
Some of these poems are lunar anamorphic streams of consciousness from the deep chaotic subterranean glitz of transgressive impulses we all share
Read them if you dare...You might find that part of yourself that you don't want you to know about

Location: Florance MA USA

Favorite Poets

Plath

Ginsberg

Blake

Poe

Bukowski

Crowley

Burroughs

Shakespeare

Ocean Vuong

Contest Wins

This member has not yet won any contests.

Workshops

		Skill level:
Primal Poetry	(syllabus)	Plunge Pool	Started 2019-06-17	Concluded
Cellar Door	(syllabus)	Olympic Pool	Started 2019-03-27	Concluded

Followed By

10 years of membership

on Stich Mouth from @Geezer

on Stich Mouth from @Geezer

on Stich Mouth from @professor jinx

5 years of membership

on Stich Mouth from @Edna Sweetlove

on Stich Mouth from @Geezer

on Fallen Queen...A Fucked Up Fairy Tale from @Edna Sweetlove

on Witching Hour from @Edna Sweetlove

"The Similar Twins" by @Marthalyn

"The Similar Twins" by @Marthalyn

on DAda Warp Land ...Ero Guro Poetry from @weirdelf

"Lyndel" by @weirdelf

"Lyndel" by @weirdelf

"Lyndel" by @weirdelf

"Lyndel" by @weirdelf

"Temple of the Doll" by @quillsveinback

"Bloodletting In Singular" by @quillsveinback

on "I’ll Whisper A Prayer" by @Butterfly15

October 2018 — 16 poems

One year of membership

SWITCH : A POEM...sado masochism XXX (since unpublished)

Membership begins

About Me

Recent Work

Contest Wins

Workshops

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