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yes you do.....

you make my day
as no one else does these days,
people walk my way
as never before
so many do come
to secretly read
the sexier.. blushier ones

now at times
I evaluate what I've written,
nothing from the world
has anything been hidden

all my poetry is off the cuff
I ain't no celebrity
nor, that kind of stuff ...
having plenty of
in a wallet ,called time

I compose poems
out of sync
many times out of rhyme

but since my youth passed
in shallow waters
with golden spoons
in swimming pools
then all became hollow

everything swept with time
that helped me imbibe
each day
came to a resolution friends,

live each day,
as tomorrow die you may
live to the hilt and enjoy
as if twere the month of May
the sunshine of life
shall take you places

many strangers will offer you roses
you are one such traveler too
the sojourn is ever so beautiful
I hope all knew...

then the destination who knows
what twill be
red carpets or greenery
else shrubs and sand
in one’s eyes
fellow friends to all occasions
ere the end arrives

then all does end up in ..
smoke and sighs!!!

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Free verse
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Had you been around about 100 years ago you could have done the grand tour, but our sojourn is just as good if only we would see.
I note young Bard that you are beginning to look with your think more than using eyes that can be deceived by those that are not good for your ways.
We have a long way to go yet and even after there will be a lightness in our ways where we can cross the universe then realise that we have in our own selves all the universes that we need.
This piece is in two parts, the first Stanza then off you go away with your journey, still though they are both of your pen, so there is a join but quite smooth.
Go well young one and enjoy the day, Yours Ian.T

There are a million reasons to believe in yourself,
So find more reasons to believe in others..

given birth....
Then i looked at the mirror behind me
which said ''U'' ..
not u ,Ian
but me...,
my friend

so as erraticity is my creativity
your whirls of words need acceptability
albeit with humility

This piece is in two parts, the first Stanza.... then off you go away with your journey,

still though they are both of your pen, there is a join...
but quite smooth. wowowo so be it ........


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