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words coinage

words coinage

poetic
creativity
challenge
rhyme
rhythm
sound of music
praise self
by
others the vivacious:

Libra gal
you are the one to allure,
attract, appeal and amaze,
you grab attention of all,
beautifully and bubbling
you are indeed charming,
credible as per you, not me,
congenial too as per you
you catch the eye
of excellent folks
who vie for you?
exquisite, extraordinary is
your elegant and energetic style,
I gape all my while.
fantastic and fabulous,
fashionable,
funny fabulous and friendly too,
full of life are you.

gorgeous by George,
good looking, glamorous,
great and glittering wow,
good natured,
a head turner
for all to see your way
humorous you are
that I can say,
influential and impressive
you ought to be,
a gal of some one
meaningfully

lovely, yes likeable perhaps,
marvelously neat,
outstanding,
persuasive
prominently pleasing,
remarkable too
are surely you.

sweet, striking, shining and smart,
stunningly superb thou art.
sparklingly white teeth,
stylishly dressed too
must be Cutie you?

wow tempting,
terrific, tremendous too
unbeatable say are you,
phew.
well groomed, witty we all hope
my youngest gal friend,
perhaps are you,
wonderful, just wonderful
my dear Cutie is you.

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Now have patience and wait the allotted time,
To post your poetry on line
This repeat of things you need to say
Are duplicated in every way...

Now have patience and wait the allotted time,
To post your poetry on line
This repeat of things you need to say
Are duplicated in every way...

A list of words for us to use,
in search of things sent to our thoughts,
By an active Muse,
Yours, Sparrow..

A list of words for us to use,
in search of things sent to our thoughts,
By an active Muse,
Yours, Ian.T, & Yenti

.
There are a million reasons to believe in yourself,
So find more reasons to believe in others..

me tc Ian

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a gem

I promised you I would go back and look and you didn't disappoint.

At your best you are utterly delightful.

cheers,
Jess
A new workshop on the most important element of poetry-
'Rhythm and Meter in Poetry'
https://www.neopoet.com/workshop/rhythm-and-meter-poetry

I wonder at times
whether i dwell in a maze
thanks
as I said on the other disastrous one
gems are born
once in a million

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I tend to find your best works have longer lines and a sense of narrative.

cheers,
Jess
A new workshop on the most important element of poetry-
'Rhythm and Meter in Poetry'
https://www.neopoet.com/workshop/rhythm-and-meter-poetry

shall keep in mind
longer ones more fun
thanks

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