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vangaurdian

Submitted by Esker on Tue, 2013-04-30 12:48

hunger realms
a trickle wind

displace me soul
the darkness grows
stretched like a shadow
curious

the muses frolicked
drawing wealth
from pleasures cup

the garden stars emerge
to cut the dreams

imagination cries out
in her hour

searching for binary
causes
revolutionary
pauses

Editing stage: 
Editing - rough draft

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Geezer

Tue, 2013-04-30 13:43

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describe the process of creativity! Nice!

"displace me soul
the darkness grows
stretched like a shadow
curious" - My favorite lines ~ Gee

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ida

Wed, 2013-05-01 14:34

birth death
all that lays between
minds eye sweeps
the refuse and the clean

I love this poem esker

the muses frolicked
drawing wealth
from pleasures cup

brilliant

Esker

Thu, 2013-05-02 14:19

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I remember cleaning springs in small communities
historical oddities....no one used them much
depending on the factory water drilled plants...
But I loved them.....clarity
quenching thirst be it for a dream
alms for sorrowful wounds
or refreshment

cycles interest my drives

lately I have been besieged
by the inundations of my own
doing.....

I love the moon stars...
wonders beyond man made
images on screens

Thanks for Reading!!

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loved

Thu, 2013-05-02 14:44

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the deepest of BLUES

loved

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