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ida
Member since April 18, 2013
Member for 13 years, 1 month
nectar
Sweeter dreams
liquid laced
sun sparkles upon leaves
billowing in falls air
untouched
gazing through
the once washed panes
dreams edge fade
upon stark realties
lovers lost
a betrayal
Suns warmth regresses to frost
Stare upon the vacant white screen
Feeling naught
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As I sip
Unconcerned
Laugher through fingers slip
Dialling for relief
Cost delinquent
Assumed for further ignorance
Fighting fair
Sours all
Gladiators feast
To the victor
The spoils
Wasted dirt
Unscented soil
Leaves a barren ground
Haunted with ghosts that may have been
But intense passions flare
Drawing blood
The kiss of death
Falls upon the deity of faith
Can the fragrance of disintegration
lure the humming bird to dance again
with age upon the leaves
betrayal withers the scent
once so sweet
feeding freedom
assurance
life may be sweet
ida’s timeline
- April 2023
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18 TueAnniversary
10 years of membership
- April 2018
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18 WedAnniversary
5 years of membership
- September 2016
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14 WedReceived a critique
on Asceticism from @Esker
"poetry is too stretch the mind and vocab so much is now plastercined into social acceptance..toe the liners... these intellectuals I know are not that type sucessful yes... she is.and haunted like I.. but she was brilli…" -
14 WedReceived a critique
on Asceticism from @Esker
"she was thirty and I was twenty four! love is a terrible thing..." -
14 WedReceived a critique
on Asceticism from @Esker
"face like a pixie...(a little tall for a "spinner"..but "Skinny") hair cut like peter pans.. gold lame shirt...trousers..penny loafers Fell in love.. Bathed in Clinique perfume mascara large eyes..dark brows I looked an…" - April 2014
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18 FriAnniversary
One year of membership
- September 2013
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18 Wed
- August 2013
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30 Fri
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22 Thu
- June 2013
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27 Thu
- April 2013
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20 SatFirst publication
Acetate
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20 SatFirst critique offered
on "B I T C H " by @Esker
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18 ThuJoined Neopoet
Membership begins
First poem published 2 days later.
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15 MonHighest posting month
April 2013 — 7 poems
About Me
I've been where your hanging, I see how your pinned
Leonard Cohen
Location: north ontario
esker
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Recent Work
nectar
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Cortege
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Asceticism
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