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we invited
Urayoán Noel
onto the car port above the Sherpas.
send in a friend.
make haste with the tape!
do you understand without much ado
meanings: the lessons for working in teams?
dreams fade if you look away from meanings...
cruel dictates prove only fodder for ghouls;
fools delight in belittling opposite tools
of research in institutions seeking help from above.
Review Request (Intensity):
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
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How was my language use?
What did you think of the rhythm or pattern or pacing?
How does this theme appeal to you?
How was the beginning/ending of the poem?
Is the internal logic consistent?
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