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Ideology of the Cranes

the group's absurd March to understanding
Lee Chang-dong ripe cries April
sensations high fall

June group therapy--slanted, webbed cow, an ex-abbreviation for thou--
lightness silly girls down beating, humming at the elite--
sanctuary denied--all the cow girls cried: exceedingly tanned!

black labs growl gruel on the brink of hammered jazz, why?
Basic German cells slam shut bang--what maneuver do you require?
Wallander Kenneth improvises to the croaking of nails...

rainy Branaugh play notes of wandering only for outstanding
Flaming Henning Godfather snow--beap, beap, beap
angels seek fresh clues--not now! clues of hues--angelic dues

Economic Determinism shows Antonio Gramsci correct on one hand:
interpretations of dream rhetorical moves the Others connect--
toward an absolute consciousness of embattled gore the more to smudge over

imagine plum Shakespeare eating sugar cubes with brick oven fudge--
Krister Henriksson drops tears like golden globes of hysterical marks--
cold mist covers fears: walrus breath in simple cubes

Ich kann morgen nicht kommen--your derided the Waltz Master!
la pluie tombe exprès--how did the rain take sides?
the wilfulness of the storms'purpose porpse an embargo on sane

Johanna Sällström the Sea Gull: take a chance, dance, dance, dance!
diving into Thailand tree released meant nothing to the dunces...
black day for tire sales in retail--you question my vision?!

we search "Ideology and Ideological State Apparatuses" encore
a day with Louis Althusser ends with reviews of presuppositions
on latitudinal maps into the Symbolic Order of the Knights of Oak Ridge

ocean dew chips fruit lose value in spades directing the production, Jeon
Do-yeon, let's lattice let Lacan leave the driving waves of speculation
frowning chilling days darken into nights of Wonder Mankell--dream therapy for you and me!

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BTW, at the beginning of the WWW, I started posting amidst the firestorms. Then ran a poetry community for some years.

Like attacking mics. Too dangerous for that now. Have commented on countless poems with wildly varying quality. Like to take radical stands based on philosophy, not popularity or useless party.

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I won't pretend to know anything about your style, but seeing as no one else has said hello yet, I figured I might as well. I know that there are some here that write very much as you do and will be anxious to greet you. We have a very broad range of poets here, a lot of great workshops and a monthly contest. If you need help with finding something or an explanation of anything, ask someone and I'm sure that you will get good advice. ~ Geezer.
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