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See the candle flicker,
Her tongue caress the flame,
Hot wax drip on naked flesh,
Her face delight in pain.

See the ropes hold tightly,
The lash caress her skin.
Buttocks, breast soft white thighs,
Anticipation makes her sigh,
Where shall the torment begin?

No pleasure without some little pain,
Enough to make her moan,
And sigh,
And sob,
And promise
To belong to me alone.

To do my every bidding,
To be my special whore.
Obey me without question,
Though I use her body sore.

She is so pure and lovely
Gives to me her all,.
Knows no inhibitions,
Holds me in her thrall.

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this is enchantingly gorgeous! you are a silver-tongued devil ;) I am rendered speechless!

*love & hugs, Cat & eddy styx


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Silver tongued? I'm not sure my wife would agree. Perhaps I was once, which gave me an idea to knock off a quickie. Watch this space. Alex

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Wow Alex, congratulations on winning the half year competition and on such an amazing poem. A great read and I loved it. Ruby :)

Give and grow - let's raise our verses together. I'm happy to comment on your work and appreciate a comment on mine.

Thank you Ruby, I certainly didn't expect that. Alex

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