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tomorrow came ........ two years ago

poet’s final resort!
this singular site tis
of the worlds best
here self styled poets
self mutually praise
and double their comment
those like you and i
we finally lament.

don’t be amazed
it’s not like other sites
where they only praise
money you do so raise.

you have to read a lot friend
don’t leave with tears
towards the end

as tears can be discomforting too
then don't say
didn’t warn you

none the less
a happy innings
my new friend
to you too!

Style / type: 
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity): 
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing stage: 


You obviously like neopoet very much and have expressed it so in your poem.
You do feel loved here.

You never fail to find something to write about you should publish your poems call the book "the diary of a poet"

enjoyed the read I dont think there is anything I could add

love Jayne-Chloe x

"My head is broken but unbowed" - William Ernest Henley

copies published two....
one for archives
and second for you

any more takers
please show up!

thanks for thinking so high of me...JC


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polished you would show much potential, just my lay persons opinion ;)

hope your having a safe and happy easter

love Jayne-Chloe xxx

"My head is broken but unbowed" - William Ernest Henley

polish my mind

and some day
you may find

my works strewn across libraries too
but still a book will be presented to you

thanks for your enlightenment


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