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tomorrow came ........ two years ago
poet’s final resort!
this singular site tis
of the worlds best
here self styled poets
self mutually praise
and double their comment
those like you and i
we finally lament.
don’t be amazed
it’s not like other sites
where they only praise
and
money you do so raise.
you have to read a lot friend
and
don’t leave with tears
towards the end
as tears can be discomforting too
then don't say
loved
didn’t warn you
none the less
a happy innings
my new friend
to you too!
Style / type:
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity):
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing stage:
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Comments
Frenchf
Sun, 2013-03-31 06:04
Dear loved
You obviously like neopoet very much and have expressed it so in your poem.
You do feel loved here.
Seren
Sun, 2013-03-31 08:08
Loved
You never fail to find something to write about you should publish your poems call the book "the diary of a poet"
enjoyed the read I dont think there is anything I could add
love Jayne-Chloe x
“The world is full of magic things, patiently waiting for our senses to grow sharper.” — W.B. Yeats
loved
Sun, 2013-03-31 09:02
"the diary of a poet"
copies published two....
one for archives
and second for you
any more takers
please show up!
thanks for thinking so high of me...JC
loved
Seren
Sun, 2013-03-31 09:05
polished you would show much
polished you would show much potential, just my lay persons opinion ;)
hope your having a safe and happy easter
love Jayne-Chloe xxx
“The world is full of magic things, patiently waiting for our senses to grow sharper.” — W.B. Yeats
loved
Sun, 2013-03-31 09:52
yeah shall
polish my mind
and some day
you may find
my works strewn across libraries too
but still a book will be presented to you
thanks for your enlightenment
loved