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time yours nor mine

time is the only element
which is neutral

but the circumstances
the environment
take their toll

some take blood
others spirit of young and old…

time severs as it does not know
from A to B or L maybe
time is a loner
a healer
for it has no brother,
nor sister
in anyone one of us
that alone is true

time is common for me and you

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How complex it is so simple there is only one thing and that is "NOW" anything prior to this is history, and unchangeable, anything after is a secret and only known to those that wrote the great books of man, on the library shelves of things to be.
"NOW" is unmeasurable as it is less than an instant, there is NO time in an instant.
I would love to see the maths, that tell me that time exists in any form other than the imagination of fragile man, lol
I even asked Sadie about Time and why they can be in many places at the same instant, she just laughs at my frailty of thought that cannot think outside of things.
All things come down to the NOW that is the only reality and it is undetectable on any scale that man has.
Anyway Sunday is past and I shall put away my Kipper box and go about my business of sending love to loved and thinks to many others,
Yours Ian.T

There are a million reasons to believe in yourself,
So find more reasons to believe in others..

who can dare challenge you
not loved at least

tc good for you
as you have Saddies support too
and you surely will have someone there
to welcome you
whenever ...

i shall go it alone
if god wills it too


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