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Ticks & Tricks

T icks and tricks is the theme of a story,
A story that I read when I was raw,
R aw, yet clever enough to apprehend,
A pprehend then activate all mind_zones,
Z ones, that were young yet lived to oft arise,
A rise with the kid in me, so I never
N ever forget the cozy bedtime story.

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I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Last few words: 
Thanks to Mark for introducing this form through his ticks & tricks winding story :)
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Thank you Mark!
You make my day. Really appreciate your comment.
I think the effort you and Paul has put in "Title Tuesday"
contest hasn't gone in vain, has it? :)

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but partially
as I am not aware of blitz
any way it's very creative
Rula
done nicely except
a story
and
a rise

that loses 1/2 the sure-prize

Lovedly except entertaining my readers.
Why do you think that arise and a story don't work well?
Thank you for your kind visit and the comment

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A story and a rise
do not in my opinion---- take it with a punch of salt .------
fall within your scheme

May be my mind has a block
then sorry
Rula

Not a single word. 'Arise' is

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Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words
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Rula
grant it to my age

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