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Lost and Found

I lost 'me' where the foliage had to stream,
in worn out memories, and cold dreams,
on the cliffs and the gulfs of time
where willows weep with no rhyme.
Then I found 'me' - bashing
through the bright ember
of September,
A phoenix grew_
I found
You

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Please check the form of the reversed Etheree..Give it a try, I am sure you will be satisfied.
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very interesting...how did you hear about this form of poetry?

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Here find all forms of poetry.
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I will be checking into it!

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Interesting form. It gives beauty to the art.
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"Time will crush on us if we don't utilize it. Just remember, you're an element of time".

~Jackweb

Jack. Appreciate it!

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........Robert Frost☺

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I wanna play with one line.

where willows whine* (weep) or (wail) with no rhyme.

Just a suggestion. Keeps the alliterative aspect. In the States we call them “weeping willows”

Tim

V. Much appreciate your suggestion.
Done
Thank you so much.

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Hello, Rula!
This is fun, especially with such wonderful rhyme! I love the beautiful theme and its perfect title. I always look forward to your wisdom and knowledge of structured poetry.
Thank you! xx
L

Friend.
Always great to hear from you.

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Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words
........Robert Frost☺

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The feeling of our losing ourselves and then finding again! You have captured the emotions with vivid imagery. Well done.

~RoseBlack~

Thank you as always.

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Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words
........Robert Frost☺

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Thank you so much Mark.

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Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words
........Robert Frost☺

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I'll likely try this form but it usually takes this many line for long winded me to just get started lol

Please give it a try.
I am looking forward to reading it.

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Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words
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much better

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For the feedback

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Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words
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Well done!
L

Excellent job. Congratulations are in order.

Tim

Hearty Congratulations!
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"Time will crush on us if we don't utilize it. Just remember, you're an element of time".

~Jackweb

it took reading it three tiMEs before I found me--clever!

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