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Amen

Submitted by Rula on Tue, 2023-02-14 15:17

God!
Keep me a home
with walls that are prayers,
with windows that are pleas,
with doors that are supplications
to stay safe
in the face
Of such chaotic world
Turkey

Last few words: 
My heart goes to all those who lost their lives, homes and loved ones in Turkey and Syria
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Editing - rough draft
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Not Explicit Content

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Lavender

Tue, 2023-02-14 16:08

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Dear Rula,
Thank you for this prayer, and amen...
xxx
L

Rula

Mon, 2023-03-13 11:18

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dearest Lavender!

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Rula

Mon, 2023-03-13 11:18

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dearest Lavender!

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Rosewood Apothecary

Tue, 2023-02-14 20:19

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You’ve said something here everyone needs to hear from time to time. A deep plea of human compassion.

Tim

Rula

Mon, 2023-03-13 11:19

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Tim.
Thank you for reading and commenting!

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Clentin

Thu, 2023-03-09 09:50

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Human compassion seems to be out of fashion i this modern world.
Loved your poem

Rula

Mon, 2023-03-13 11:22

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Sir! Hope more would be able to reach those in trouble at least with a prayer.
Thank you for reading!

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