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For those who missed Loved

Each year at the midnight bells chime….. I feel a spinal spasm ….have I grown a bit older ….nearing the periphery of my eternal resting place…. or have I endeared ….a time gone by ….just in haste.

Each year I feel a bit of chill …as the snows pave my way …but then small mercies… have a way… they help you with champagne …on a New Years eve day.

The day is betwixt, past, present and tomorrow
but soon it will be the end,
a beginning of another one
which after 365 days
will again bend
so messages of love I do send
on all Happy New Years

This one is as special
as was the last,
as will be the next
as another twas !

Each year at the midnight bells chime….. I feel a spinal spasm ….have .......I grown a bit old…

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Free verse
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the flow was like a river nun

your maiden comment ever


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I agree with Emika, it is subtle but wonder what inspired you to write this when we are much into the New Year already.


raj (sublime_ocean)

on another site
where I had taken a sabbatical
many friends lost me ...
So I composed this one afresh
to let them know
I was still alive
Many thanks glad u enjoyed the flow


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