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Tanka

Submitted by Barbara Writes on Thu, 2012-08-30 23:36

friends are forever
come pen verses together
luminous poets

savor fresh ink when you write
Renga Neopoet Style

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Structured: Eastern
Review Request (Intensity): 
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing stage: 
Editing - rough draft

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Rula

Fri, 2012-08-31 09:57

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Barbra..I might join after finishing the workshops. My plate is really full

P.s Is the word sly a nice one? I mean it rhymes well with style but not sure about the meaning that it conveys

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Barbara Writes

Fri, 2012-08-31 10:49

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thanks i see what you mean. i dont know where my mind was when i looked this word up lol

i rechecked difinition and changed that line i hope this i much better. thanks for reading and critiquing it is really appreiate.

would love having you at the renga table. just one haiku or senyru verse. or a two line verse and you're done. all it takes is a minute or two.

looking foeward to seeing you there when you can.

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