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Sunku 14 Workshop

Winter
cold and ice
come to end

dead trees
naked twigs
abandoned nest

greener
life appear
sprout of foliage

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Exquisite Sunku Barbara...

Tell you what? If Sunku form is to be symbolized, your profile pic could be a good fit feature wise

Regards...

raj (sublime_ocean)

I call myself pixie dust on Facebook and blackpixi on instagram plus I created the email the last black pixie. And I’m planning a blackpixi photo of me and a logo hopefully drawn by my graphic designer son dress like the pixie in my profile.

I’m trying to brand me as blackpixi by bringing my writing poetry commentary and photographs together for my first Poetry book. My nephew a writer actor play producer promise to help me put together my first book. I just can’t get it but one the first one it done I got it.

He’s busy so he may not get to me like my poet music video activist big time cousin in philly promise to do with my 1 and only song hook call the gibbous moon but never got to.

I think my sunku poems along with my rengas tankas haikus and senyru is a perfect fit. I have a youtube channel and platform on patreon giving my perspective on other peoples YouTube videos and hot topics.

I got one guy to patron me and one lady to subscribe to my YouTube channel. I went from 0 subscribers to 28 in couple of months.

Thanks for introducing me to sunku and IRiz workshop. Sunku is prefect for Americans Style Japanese Poetry collaboration workshop I created here.

I see what IRiz and Jess is doing with accreditation as a haiku and I think it’s wonderful. Instead of a 4 Poetry format in my collaboration Poetry workshop I can make it a 5 Poetry format with Renga-Tanka-haiku-senyru-sunku.

My blackpixi profile or just pixi for a world wide fit sounds good. I’ve been trying to brand and trademark me forever. I think I got what I’ve been searching me out for. I just need to figure out how to trademark me as blackpixi for success.

*Collaborative Poetry Workshop*
Amqerican Version of Japanese Poetry
~American Renga~
Free Verse, Western, Modern, etc
~ Renga ~
Haiku, Senyru, Tanka, Renga
All Neopoets are welcome to join the Collaborative Poetry Writing fun.

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I am glad that one small comment by me about your profile led to your providing lots of insights on what you are upto...

my very best wishes for success in your endeavors and upcoming book.

much love and regards..

raj (sublime_ocean)

A raj inspired sunku but gotta wait. I’ll put in the Workshop as sunku 15

*Collaborative Poetry Workshop*
Amqerican Version of Japanese Poetry
~American Renga~
Free Verse, Western, Modern, etc
~ Renga ~
Haiku, Senyru, Tanka, Renga
All Neopoets are welcome to join the Collaborative Poetry Writing fun.

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Winter cold and ice come? to end?
I love your images, naked twigs are trembling...
I would finish it with stanza about one little stem of new grass. It would make the poem more whole. Just imagine all these bare branches and just one new green thing showing. Is it too early? Will it survive? Will the spring take over?

IRiz

I think you’re right. made some changes. I hope you find it appealing

*Collaborative Poetry Workshop*
Amqerican Version of Japanese Poetry
~American Renga~
Free Verse, Western, Modern, etc
~ Renga ~
Haiku, Senyru, Tanka, Renga
All Neopoets are welcome to join the Collaborative Poetry Writing fun.

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