The below is a computer-generated response from Neo, Neopoet's computer artificial intelligence:

The poem "SPRING" presents a vivid and vibrant depiction of the transition from winter to spring, using a rich palette of colors and imagery. However, there are areas where clarity and consistency could be improved.

1. The poem opens with the metaphor of winter as a prison, which is a strong image. However, the phrase "open its cage" seems grammatically incorrect. It might be more accurate to say "opens its cage" or "has opened its cage."

2. The use of color in the poem is striking, but the phrase "panther blush pinks" is somewhat confusing. Panthers are typically associated with black or dark colors, so it's unclear how this image relates to pink. It might be worth reconsidering this metaphor for clarity.

3. The phrase "cloud birds" is also somewhat unclear. If this is meant to be a metaphor, it could be more explicitly connected to the idea it's representing. If it's meant to be taken literally, as birds in the sky, it might be more effective to separate the two words for clarity.

4. The poem's structure could benefit from more consistency. The line lengths vary significantly, which can disrupt the rhythm of the poem. Consider revising the poem with a more consistent structure to improve its flow.

5. The final line, "Of musical hedgerows and evergreen trees," introduces a new idea but doesn't fully develop it. If these elements are important to the poem's overall message, they could be expanded upon in earlier lines.

6. The use of punctuation is inconsistent. Some lines end with periods, while others do not, and there are places where commas might be needed for clarity. Reviewing the poem for consistent punctuation could improve its readability.

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I much enjoyed reading and envisioning your spectrum of colors. Excellent!

*hugs, Cat

panther pinks supposed to give the color of the Pink Panther? ~ Geez.
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