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Spring

Spring Spring,
Is a beautiful thing,
Where flowers grow,
And the birds sing.

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Please use care (this is a sensitive subject for me, do not critique harshly)
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This is the first poem I wrote at 6 years old and my teacher said I would grow up to be an Eccentric writer, thus the Eccentric Poet was born!
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Not Explicit Content

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and like a drug it feels
warm air and apple blossoms
heavy clothes off we peel
robins come around and ugly possums
spring has sprung
and in your step
you feel so young
and full of pep

Very cute Poet,
Very nice story,

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Awww tyvm lovely.

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Awww thankyou so much xxxxx

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was right! Eccentricity is purely a matter of opinion, but if you ask me, all poets have the trait; else we would not share our thoughts with the world. I'm glad that your teacher's words had that effect on you; to help you so many years later, share this first poem with us. ~ Geez

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Hiya I got the bug at 6 and just couldn't stop, fell in love with writing xx

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Hello!
How wise you were at 6 years old! One could add many words but your 6-year-old self nailed it with the most honest, descriptive, and poetic language. Darling poem!
Thank you!
Lavender

Thankyou so much xxx

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