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spoken word..dispair

sometimes we speak senselessly...

simply excellent thought
that passed my mind yesterday,
my breath held its sway,
I blurted all my hearts disparaging way
but then it was too late …
the words got registered straight pathway

there was no way to erase them,
so no tears to wash
but this I could perhaps sadly say
the night passed in a miserable way,
but it passed
I'm glad smoothly that day

last night twas
the night
that was...

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Free verse
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this is not one of them. See my blog "The musicality of language."
http://www.neopoet.com/weirdelf/blog/wed-2013-03-13-1736

Your feelings are real, your poetry is rhinestones and sequins.

Read, read the great poets, educate yourself. Elevate yourself from this mediocrity.

cheers,
Jess
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perhaps
limestone you'd meant..

I read your blog
and brushed my hair
never to compose any more poetry here
shall I dare..

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you know I have found gems in your words.

cheers,
Jess
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only a guy
who can whip his horse
when due
can win the Derby
that I know that you knew..

you consider some gems
as found in marshes
and
my poetry at times ....
is marvelous
friend say you...
wow to you
for the lessons you give
whole -heartedly
sincerely and true.

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And I have learnt so much from everyone. This is not to be forgotten.

then teach...
next unlearn
and finally in an incinerator burn..
amen

save land
use electric crematoria

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you would not be regarded as such a moron.

cheers,
Jess
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a moron has to be one
natures gift is solid
thanks for the eulogy
I love it as humour
its my SPICE moronically
if not metaphorically
jess tc
you are an intelligent man
unlike morons
most of us..

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so the the rest is pure pretentiousness.

cheers,
Jess
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CALLIOPE’S SONG

Rubies and sapphires
emeralds and gold
words like diamonds
colors
dancing in the sun
visions that shatter
images that stun.

But rhinestones and sequens shine
just as bright
and angels and demons
beat the same drum
to a Music heard by none..

you come at the anointed hour
to place the wounded soldiers head
upon your lap
to comfort a dying soul
lest he becomes
a martyr ere..

what of rhinestones
we all are cut hard diamonds
if the jeweler knows
the four cee dimensions
each has his own view
some are blind
some not tooo...

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you wanker

cheers,
Jess
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don't pick
but comment
if you will
and now silence
enough of it

find another bait!
ere you fish!

1. A person who masturbates.
2. A detestable person.
sad ...............

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so I call you a 'wanker" in the sense of the word meaning pure self indulgence. You prove it every time you claim your poetry has value by the number of 'hits' it gets

cheers,
Jess
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For other uses, see Dialect (disambiguation).

Dialectic (also dialectics and the dialectical method) is a method of argument for resolving disagreement that has been central to European and Indian philosophy since antiquity. The word dialectic originated in ancient Greece, and was made popular by Plato in the Socratic dialogues. The dialectical method is discourse between two or more people holding different points of view about a subject, who wish to establish the truth of the matter guided by reasoned arguments.[1]

The term dialectics is not synonymous with the term debate. While in theory debaters are not necessarily emotionally invested in their point of view, in practice debaters frequently display an emotional commitment that may cloud rational judgement. Debates are won through a combination of persuading the opponent; proving one's argument correct; or proving the opponent's argument incorrect. Debates do not necessarily require promptly identifying a clear winner or loser; however clear winners are frequently determined by either a judge, jury, or by group consensus. The term dialectics is also not synonymous with the term rhetoric, a method or art of discourse that seeks to persuade, inform, or motivate an audience.[2] Concepts, like "logos" or rational appeal, "pathos" or emotional appeal, and "ethos" or ethical appeal, are intentionally used by rhetoricians to persuade an audience.[3]

you educate us
the world needs guys like you

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