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Space Apace:

All routes we traverse
Places and phases diverse
Speck of Universe

Human race in prime
“A Brief History of Time”
An era sublime?

Striking Mother lode
Many light years from abode
To enforce our code

Established in Space
Living our usual ways
An alien race?

Style / type: 
Structured: Eastern
Review Request (Intensity): 
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Last few words: 
Space "the Final Frontier" - over and out
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Not our usual place to be.
Just for you I see.
Start anew would we.
I don't know if I agree.

Thank you for your thoughts

good progressive links of thought expressed trough a stream of Haikus.

i liked it..


raj (sublime_ocean)

Thanks for your appreciation. As I wrote this, I figured that if wide open Space was viewed with the same narrow view of parceling, control, ownership and hegemony by powers that be than it would lead to "Star Wars" by limited minds occupying finite spaces in their ivory towers.

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good ideology


raj (sublime_ocean)

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