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Some People Are So Amazing

The genius in you rocks my emotions, and
Volcanos under virgin seas, erupts
Rumbling noises heard miles away 
Warns islanders of pending smoke and fiery ash
And demons behind my eyes seek your demise

You never cease to amaze me with your crafty ways, and
Hyaenas live at bottom of the food chain
Scavenging for quick steals from lion king's hunt
Learned hard lesson from power of kings roar and mightiness
And a kingly crown of thorns I've design for you in my mind's eye

Fighting for the love of God, lost the battle, ended warring
Tasmanian devils fought hard against wolverines
Packs of wolves howl at moons, announcing its presence in the night
You are indeed amazing, how you subtly crush my spirit every time
And my hearts aches over and over, again and again, I silently cry

If your love was as amazing as your craftiness 
I'd wish to bottle it up and take a swig when I'm feeling down
Maybe a hug today, a kiss tomorrow, a kind word next week,
Little understanding, bit of compassion, touch of consideration, some respect,
Or you're be looking at moon under dark skies wondering if I ever think of you once in a while

Some people are so amazing, and for certain 
You are one of them, when your ocean like tides is kicking my hyde

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Comments

but of course it is ...
as it leads a reader wandering
in the terrains of the authors mind
did she /he have a spouse in mind?
great if it be so...

loved

its a spouse, significant other. It's whoever the reader relates to.
Thanks for taking time to read and comment

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author comment

yes ,whenever I am in doubt ,
I traverse across the pages of
Neopoetry
as I am convinced to find
the semblance of spouses mentality
across the rivers of endless/infinite time
Thanks for having not ignored, my comment

loved

thats mostly what I write about .lol

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UNIVERSAL SEX INSPIRED BY BARBARA
By Loved
now some where on top of the scale.

loved

This is quite a piece of poetry from you! Peace to you! ;) Loved the metaphors in the first stanza, and the superb use of satire throughout! Some people are indeed amazing - you are one of them for all the "write" reasons! ;)
You go girl! This poem is smouldering, along with the emotions that stoked the fire!!
Thanks for sharing

Bonitaj

Thanks for reading

*Collaborative Poetry Workshop* American Version of Japanese Poetry ~ Renga ~ Haiku, Senyru, Tanka.

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((((((((((((((( Barbara ))))))))))))))) There that's a proper hug sent with unconditional love so that you will know that it is pure..
Lovely write about the others that will always stay at the bottom of the food chain, Yours Ian.T

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There are a million reasons to believe in yourself,
So find more reasons to believe in others..

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