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Slowly burning flame...
All the time …
I am on fire...
my body flames …
none is ever with me to play …
my daily loving game …
so I invite all who do play…
and have a happy day….
just to read my poetry as always
and imagine how within you …
it causes an explosion
commotion and hopefully
an imagined orgasm-----
if you fail
let me know …
to hell
I will let my exotic poetry flow….
Have a try today….
such an opportunity….
comes in, if at all…
once in a way...
have a sexy day...
permit me to now say…
by the way
thanks for your invitation…
on a sunny snowy day!
Style / type:
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity):
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing stage:
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Comments
Ian.T
Thu, 2013-12-26 04:41
Loved
This one is a little scruffy,
but with just a few changes it will shine..
The line "none is ever with me to play"
well the none is more of a physical object,
where you need a person,
just that from me,
I shall let the others say their say,
maybe later today,
Yours Ian.T
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So find more reasons to believe in others..