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Repairs...

Alone...They are alone...
Drawn together they will heal
Hearts alive within the stone
Beat beneath the steel

Nights of yearning, be together
Days, of learning be as one
No matter what the weather
Have awesome times of fun

Hurt yourself no more
Do them the very same
Call it even score
Cancel out the game

Forgiveness is forgetting,
even for a day
For each one that is forgotten
make new remembered ways

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Higgliest bugs xxxx

Love Jayne...

("Always and Forever") - (Never lose a holy curiosity.-Albert Einstein)

smiling right back at you! Higgest bugs, love ya, ~ Gee

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this well paced and well constructed piece of writing.

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"Death" is nonsense: what is there to die?
"Life"? How could " life" "die"? That is a contradiction
in terms. Can "light" become "darkness"?
"Light" can only cease to be apparent

Wei Wu Wei

this was written for some friends that are having some very difficult times. I hope that no matter what happens they find some peace and happiness. ~ Gee

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