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Reminiscing You

Your memory is a serenade.
The melody settles
in my heart. Swaying.
Waiting for the next day it touches my soul

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A person’s memory lives on in your heart even after they have disappear from view, no matter how much time passes.
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Memories are good to keep and hard to forget, it's a nice one thanks for sharing your memory with us.

love the melody settling in the heart. Nice words, nice thoughts.

I'd rather learn from one bird how to sing
than teach ten thousand stars how not to dance
ee cummings

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