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R a n d o m . . . M a s q u e
carousel wickedness
silk maruader
beneath the night
the bare light burns
achieving endless
grim nirvana
knuckles heat against
the threads
the Borne realm stitching
broken bone elocutions
wound like spiral helix
keeps of destinations
the dusk of riders
terse with dust
violet and frenzied
arrival at all deceptions
a great crush of Love
peirced
drug laced and
passioned
sharp as a pang
sure as a fang
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Comments
ida
Wed, 2013-04-24 16:41
jim-pam-paris
grim nirvana
a welcome suitor
stunning stellar
a bow to the master
thankyou
Esker
Thu, 2013-04-25 14:03
Stella.....
Just thought of Roy Orbison..a disco ball and some hall in Mukokeelands
we live in our strange towns...township of North Bay I call this...odds bodkins
had a voice that was just like Marlon Brandos the other day with this bad cold
that has been hanging around like Saturday Nites skit that my female friend
of a friend loved.."Bad Idea" Im improving slowly....but aged
love the Jim Pam Paris....indeed!!!!!!!!
Thanks Ida!
Geezer
Wed, 2013-04-24 20:01
Really good stuff...
Just a couple of tweaks:
Did you really mean [violet] or violent?
pierced
You wound these words around each other in such a fashion that I couldn't imagine them any other way!
~ Gee
This must be the place, 'cause there ain't no place like this place anywhere near this place
Esker
Thu, 2013-04-25 14:05
Wounded up Wordlings..
Violet....instead of violent...
that time of night...when light still reveals the feilds
the alleys...the carnage and the carnys..not yet night
not yet the carousel..not yet..
wound wound..yes my friend Geezer
words are a work and wonderful!
Thank You Sir!
klo
Wed, 2013-04-24 22:01
stung
"arrival at all deceptions
a great crush of Love
peirced
drug laced and
passioned"
sums up the night i had last night
better then i could put into words
Esker
Thu, 2013-04-25 14:07
Hah Youthful Youth..You Live!!!
Im happy that you can read this and appreciate
it!! Indeed...I awake and creak to life
throw on my Nick Cave attire and black leather shoes
run a ragged brush through the mess and grim at my
face in the mirror....toss on the leather with pockets full
of god knows what and stand waiting for my ride on Lakeshore
noting the looks from drivers driving by..
"Drive on driver it dont mean no mind"
Thank You Klo for living!!