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Pensive Native:
When we scorn, we lose
Walk a mile in others shoes
Don’t judge, let them choose
Style / type:
Structured: Eastern
Review Request (Intensity):
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Last few words:
Native gold
Editing stage:
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Comments
raj
Tue, 2018-01-30 12:35
Good message scripted in the
Good message scripted in the Haiku/Senryu...especially the need to be empathetic rather than being impulsively judgemental...
Regards...
raj (sublime_ocean)
OriginalRhyku
Tue, 2018-01-30 22:03
Raj, appreciate your
Raj, appreciate your constructive comments. Thanks.
author commentOriginalRhyku
Tue, 2018-01-30 22:06
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