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Pageantry Of Vanity

Submitted by BettyBuff on Sat, 2015-07-04 06:27

It's all about me
No self worth
without a "selfie"

Attention span
of a goldfish
No real journey
to enrich

I-Phone
I-Mac
I-ndivdual
See the connection?

Editing stage: 
Editing - rough draft

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Geezer

Sat, 2015-07-04 19:38

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it all day every day. So many people are too self-absorbed! Appearances are everything! Not believing for a moment, that caring about others just for the sake of caring about them is better than what other people think about you. Nice work, ~ Gee

This must be the place, 'cause there ain't no place like this place anywhere near this place

judyanne

Sun, 2015-07-05 07:59

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Yes.... all I have to say... yes
Good write
Now excuse me, but it's been 5 minutes since I took a photo of myself, so I have to go now :)
love judy
xxx

'Each for the joy of the working, and each, in his separate star,
shall draw the Thing as he sees It, for the God of Things as They are.'
(Rudyard Kipling)

Sparrow

Sun, 2015-07-05 10:14

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will history write that we lost a generation and mankind never recovered, I am not religious but we need a figurehead to guide all those lost souls, or some nation to start believing in man and what it could achieve if they all pulled together.
Lovely to see your writes here,
Yours as always, Ian..

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Esker

Sun, 2015-09-13 00:21

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i click torrents...
I click writes...
I click emotion.
I click and start fights...

Selfie Selfie Like Me
bats up in the belfry
only got a hundred
friends
no one wants you too
the end

ahh the new generation
its the see generation
the hear generation
the jeer generation

clatter and chatter
of the hold it out
see see
propaganda
tittulate capitulate
exposable disposable
clones

I like clever works

thank U

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