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P a l l M a u l z

void a check
crushed like a fender slender

pull it tight
back from the skew
strut on and on

glamour smash

paint fleck and rust dust
your glitter annointments
the gleaming backscatter

crawling hunger licking
like a hot blue wave

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crazee..written in the fabric of the rush
twenty five years apart
but im ignited
burning in this slumber
woken from the sleep

and damn I will Dream
and accept the touchs
and hugs
the smiles....

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bald cypress dangling
hair tangled strands
in bluevelvet mist
shrouding the
yawning swamp
hungry for decay
where it holds
corroded sirens

Crawling down the alley on your hands and knee
Im sure you're not protected, for it's plain to see
The diamond dogs are poachers and they hide behind trees
Hunt you to the ground they will, mannequins with kill appeal
DAVID BOWIE

the cream moon
asleep the winters death
the throne hip bared

(listening to "Lillian" Depeche...archaic memories flow
I read your words alive like candle flame...envoke the
wake.....)

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is strange! Felt the heat of that blue flame!
You have my smile. ~ Gee

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the forgotten wrecks
caught in the moment of impact
...
like love...living....the calm before the
borne wind of it...

Thank You!

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