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P I N P R I C T

slip along your svelte fuselage
i will find your break
the cracks
like ice in the cold
groaning softly under its
pressure folds..

you ve lent me your avarice
compassions
bound against the will
like pressure holds

you wished me bold
but once lept
the dark sweet evolution
of inertia in its desire
the hunger of gravity
is its deliverance

like rain falling
bask in the sensation
chilled driven
or subtle
as new thorns on old
blooms

the theories of rations
and the choice
of passion.....

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Comments

There aren't words for the brilliance of this poem

I've read it over and over it just gets better with each reading

This is the best poem I've read in an age I wish I'd written it

Bravissimo

Love JC xxx

("Always and Forever") - (Never lose a holy curiosity.-Albert Einstein)

Got to agree this is excellent, Regards Roscoe..

Roscoe Llane,

Religion will rip your faith off, and return
for the mask of disbelief that's left.

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