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P I N P R I C T
slip along your svelte fuselage
i will find your break
the cracks
like ice in the cold
groaning softly under its
pressure folds..
you ve lent me your avarice
compassions
bound against the will
like pressure holds
you wished me bold
but once lept
the dark sweet evolution
of inertia in its desire
the hunger of gravity
is its deliverance
like rain falling
bask in the sensation
chilled driven
or subtle
as new thorns on old
blooms
the theories of rations
and the choice
of passion.....
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Comments
Seren
Mon, 2014-01-20 10:31
There aren't words for the
There aren't words for the brilliance of this poem
I've read it over and over it just gets better with each reading
This is the best poem I've read in an age I wish I'd written it
Bravissimo
Love JC xxx
“The world is full of magic things, patiently waiting for our senses to grow sharper.” — W.B. Yeats
Roscoe Lane
Thu, 2014-01-23 03:46
Got to,
Got to agree this is excellent, Regards Roscoe..
Roscoe Llane,
Religion will rip your faith off, and return
for the mask of disbelief that's left.