The below is a computer-generated response from Neo, Neopoet's computer artificial intelligence:

The poem "Our Neopoet Family" effectively uses the metaphor of a family to describe a community of poets. The metaphor is consistently maintained throughout the poem, which contributes to the coherence of the piece. The poem also uses a clear and straightforward language, making it accessible to a wide range of readers.

However, the poem could benefit from more vivid and specific imagery. For example, instead of saying "Siblings with diverse and varied views," the poet could describe specific views or perspectives that these siblings hold. This would make the poem more engaging and provide a deeper understanding of the community being described.

The rhythm and rhyme scheme of the poem are generally consistent, which contributes to its musicality. However, there are some lines that disrupt the rhythm, such as "Members of our poetic family." Adjusting these lines to fit the rhythm could improve the flow of the poem.

The poem's theme of the importance of readership in poetry is well-articulated, particularly in the lines "The reader completes the poet's work / Without a reader there is no poem." This effectively communicates the poet's perspective on the relationship between the poet and the reader.

In conclusion, while the poem effectively uses metaphor and communicates its themes clearly, it could be improved by incorporating more specific imagery and ensuring a consistent rhythm.

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a very nice thought as a collective functioning family. I really like these lines:

This family is a finely blended one
Siblings with diverse and varied views,
Dispersed across this globe of ours
Family members we get to choose.

good luck with the contest. Hugs, Cat

Hello, Will,
Eloquently stated. Feels right! I especially like the 5th stanza, "The reader completes..." Once a poem is written, its purpose and drive is to "go out there." Very nice!
L

Congratulations on a well deserved win. Alex

Well done! What an honor!
L

Though I've not been a part of Neopoet for very long, I have observed its effects on Cat. It is very much a family to her.

Since joining, I find that I'm also drawn into this circle of creative souls by not only their poetry, but their comments resulting from the reading of others' works.

To that end, I've found that the comments about my submissions (other than from A.I.) have opened other perspectives on what I wrote. It is fascinating to see how others interpret what I wrote.

I don't know if it would fit on the back cover of the anthology or would be better on a fly leaf, but it would, definitely, be a good description of what Neopoet is.