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only three pains

three pains
there are three pains i know of the first is labour and she yells till the one comes out and yells she stops weeping and tears flow of joy now we all know as the voice drowned by the miraculous one.. then she recalls the pain virginous at the hilt when the hymen was split and the joy of pain combined the third pain is when one takes leave and has no more contribution to make the distant horizon bugles a summon leave all behind now let them pain life has to end somehow so wait of what of pain remains..

three pains
there are three pains
I know of,
the first is labour
as she yells
till the one comes out and yells …
she stops weeping as tears flow
of joy now we all know …
as her voice drowns by the miraculous one..

then she recalls the pain
virginous at the hilt
when the hymen was split
and the joy of pain
combined

the third pain is when one takes leave
has no more contribution to make
the distant horizon bugles a summon
leave all behind
now let them pain
life has to end somehow
so weigh of what of pain remains..

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Pain of toothache
Pain of ill health and of heartache
Pain of cold
Pain of hot
What a lot of pains we've got
But you have identified the worst
With which we have been cursed

Good thoughts on the subject
xx

the minor pains are like appetizers
what of pain of a lovers betrayal???
living agony

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This ones quite deep I like your last stanza how true it is

Love Jc xxx

("Always and Forever") - (Never lose a holy curiosity.-Albert Einstein)

some guy wrote

''men have only a single pain
so I asked this
howz it??

''.....what pain for all men
as you say only one ...
men have so many pains...
first pain is to take pains
to get one ...
who will bear all pains....
.

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Everyone feels a degree of pain
Be it a headache or a burst appendix
we all face pain in different ways
but pain shouldn't make up a life
it should be cast off as a part of life

I've felt the first two pains but I
would hope that death comes with swift
wings for anyone suffering

A life ending shouldn't be remembered
for the pain it should be celebrated
and remembered with some measure of
Joy .....

Sorry for the ramble lol

Love Jc xxx

("Always and Forever") - (Never lose a holy curiosity.-Albert Einstein)

all pain ought to be forgotten
once life has been milked fully,
birth and death are two faces of the same coin
one can't exist without the other...

so smile as you cast off the pain
and take leave of mankind,
let others not grieve as you fly into the wilderness
let them too celebrate your having walked this way,
some day we too shall fly away....

''''''would hope that death comes with swift
wings for anyone suffering ...'''

this is a hope and desire of all
hope scientists develop a switch
to end the suffering
and keep population under check

let us remember when the Lord lived
each one knew the other
today none cares
nor does bother
Who is ones neighbour...

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