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Oh God,,u there!

Oh God
I am no God …
but your kind imagination
when you arrived on the Earth
you all gave me birth
I then presumed
I must be the salvation
all seek in me

In the event of calamity
I arrive and stare
you all watch up in thin air.
so I smile
to help you retain your faith

diseases become rampant
choleras and what not
increase of population
I have to balance.

So call me God if you will
I can't hold back a tsunami still
but tis natures will
God you must call me still

I can see you all
love me
as much
as I love you

I’m no real God
but your kindness
gives greatness

I have all your genes within me
am I that God
you seek maybe….

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God here, what's with all this name dropping,
don't you know I am so busy
trying to clear up 4000 + or - a few years of your total lack of understanding, and misuse of the thing you have perceived to be God.
I gave you a beautiful garden and you messed up.
Now look at you all, rather have a gun than feed the children,
An atom accelerator total bloody logic, but only I can eat energy.
When will you realise that you still have enough resources here to live in a beauty that even I would covet.
That's a laugh,
I seem to be quoting my rules, or are they cliches, as a guide to your existence.
What's that you say there were ten, my memory needs sorting.
Oh shit I should have told him to stop at two.
I did send someone to tell you about that but it all went to pot.
Mark 12/ 24-28 or somewhere in that history book.
Can't think how they wrote all that lot.
Dead sea scrolls, well they are there
so where is the original copy of my giant book,
So you put a few pennies in the box on Sunday
or whatever day you choose, what about my Royalties, it has been a bestseller for many years.
I'll have to leave you to sort things out,
there are other universes to make and some to sort out.
Why oh Why did I start this bloody creation thing,
do you know and is the answer still 42..?????
Yours as always Ian.T. or whoever

There are a million reasons to believe in yourself,
So find more reasons to believe in others..

i am the sun
god of
Silent man
U call urself

...'''''''There are a million reasons to believe in yourself,
So find more reasons to believe in others....'''
u said it I heard it


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I is only playing with words throwing them at you for a while can't get the snow to go into a ball or you would have a fight on your hands.
Take care young Bard, Yours Ian.T

There are a million reasons to believe in yourself,
So find more reasons to believe in others..

thinking of taking a sabbatical now
what do u say friend


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Thought you put satanical not sabbatical I shall go to my cave and retrieve my reading glasses.
You have a great evening ours here has passed into morning, Yours ZZZZZ Ian ZZZZZZzzz T.He He

There are a million reasons to believe in yourself,
So find more reasons to believe in others..

satanical not sabbatical

sabbatical as you sleep

satanical when ur in church


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The overpowering urge within you to help and console those who are victims of nature's fury or ailments is expressed very well in this poem, where I believe you are trying to send a message that God is within long as we make an attempt to help the needy as best as one can...

raj (sublime_ocean)

from the ocean of India
across the multi- oceans
some one has held my hand ....
raj thanks
we are but instruments in the hands of the unknown
but Solar power


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